Master of One - Chapter 3 rewrite (Patreon)

Ok, I know I said I probably wasn't going to get much writing done, but I finished my rewrite/update of Scene 3. It didn't require as much editing as the first few, as I think the tone was about right, but the voice needed to be tightened up.

Upload includes the first few chapters as well, but there are only a few words different from last night.