milkrs, a growth story - Page 1 (Patreon)

I'm gonna try to make an actual comic. I will try to aim for at least 10 pages, we will see how it goes. I'm going to try using a simpler style as well, especially for the shading and stuff, since I think doing the shading the way I'm used to too fast makes it look bad, so I think I better try cell shading instead. Please tell me what you think about it. Do you think it looks good enough like that, given that I might be able to draw the next pages faster, or not?