Outline - Learning the Ropes N.C.U. (Patreon)

Everyone seems to be really enjoying the N.C.U. story line, so here is the outline for the next chapter!

 (Please note the story may vary from the outline) (Also Please note SPOILERS!) 

 

Rayne’s dorm room

• Rayne is frantically trying to gather her things, 
• Wanting to avoid klaire
• Managed to get out of the dorm and into the stair well just as klaire leaves the elevator
• Overhears her on her phone say she is glad that her annoying roommate isn’t around to invade her space. 
• Rayne just smiles and comments something to herself along the lines of “just wait”

Laura’s dorm room

• Laura greets rayne at the door
• Asks how she is feeling about her first hypnosis lesson.
• Asks if she read the material she asked
• Glaze over a brief summary of how hypnosis works. Don’t get too wordy
• Laura explains an induction to rayne
• Candle induction. 
• Rayne attempts to hypnotize Laura
• Laura succumbs
• Rayne admires the look of the girl and decides to have a little fun

(possible chapter split)

• Rayne wakes Laura and starts to ask about unwilling subjects (klaire)
• Laura explains you have to walk before you run. 
• Rayne gets devious and starts to hypnotize laura again. 
• Laura succumbs easily.  
• Rayne tries to push the subject but laura starts to wake up
• Rayne puts laura to sleep
• Gets a devious idea
• Uses hypnosis to tie up laura
• Wakes her and lets her struggle. 
• Interrogates laura, using tickling, and restraint
• Finally gives her a (hypnotic) truth serum
• Uses massage, the candle, the restraints and truth serum suggestions to get info
• Laura finally details how to get a person to submit without realizing it. 
• Going to take practice
• Rayne thanks laura with a kiss, then puts her to sleep. 
• Realizes she is low on time
• Suggests that laura remember only the candle. 
• Wakes laura
• Discuss the sorority and how she needs to pledge with trisha
• Rayne leaves thinking about how to get klaire, and needing more practice. 

Patreon Bonus - alternate Scene

• Instead of laura going under from the candle rayne goes under
• Takes lauren a minute to realize that Rayne hypnotized herself
• Surveys the scene then feels one of trisha’s suggestions kick in. 
• Starts to suggest to rayne that she is tied up. 
• Wakes rayne and interrogates her about why she wants to learn hypnosis
• Tickling, mild playful torgure
• Uses candle to make rayne talk
• Puts rayne out. 
• Laura wakes her but pretends to be hypnotized. 
• Implication is that Laura was awake the whole time. And rayne was hypnotized

Second patreon bonus

• As Rayne goes to part Laura hypnotizes her, 
• Clearly following other suggestions gives rayne some ideas to help with klaire
• Takes a moment to feel up the sleeping redhead
• Erases her memory and wakes her. 
• Final parting scene shows laura call trisha to tell her waht happened 
• Blanks out on phone, turns it off then wake sup and goes about her day. 

Patreon Bonus - Alternate hypnosis scenes

1. Replace candle induction with pendant / pocket watch
2. Progressive relaxation induction