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Naruto Crossdressing Caption 12 (5$) tier Feminization caption (Patreon)

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2024-07-15 13:38:40
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A question for everyone is the caption comparititively more high quality for you this time ?

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I mistakenly left a small part of this caption here's the full part The next day, Naruto was still wearing the bra and panties from the day before. He felt embarrassed and knew he couldn't do anything to change it. As he got ready, he tried to ignore the tight underwear but found it hard. He knew he had to wear them as long as Kurenai wanted. Kurenai saw Naruto's discomfort and smiled, enjoying her control over him. She picked up some red lipstick and walked over. "Come here. Naruto." she said firmly. "Let me give you a little makeover." Naruto obeyed, feeling even more embarrassed. He stood in front of her, tense and blushing. Kurenai applied the lipstick slowly, enjoying her power. She took her time, savoring Naruto's submission. When she was done, Naruto saw Jiraiya walking by on the street, and he felt hopeful. Maybe Jiraiya could help "Pervy Sage!" Naruto called out desperately. But Kurenai quickly grabbed Naruto's arm and pulled him close, giving him a warning look. "Not a word," she whispered sternly. "Don't say anything to him." "Since you want to go out so much, how about we take a walk?" Naruto's heart sank. He didn't want to be seen dressed like this. "B-but people will see me," Naruto protested, his voice shaking. "I can't go out like this." Kurenai smirked, enjoying his discomfort. She knew he had no choice. "Oh, come on now, Naruto," she said condescendingly. "No one will recognize you. And even if they do, they'll just think you look like a pretty little girl." They started walking through the busy streets of Konoha. People were giving them curious looks. Naruto felt exposed and kept his head down, avoiding eye contact. Kurenai's students, Neji Hyuga and Rock Lee, saw them and came over to say hello. "Hello, Kurenai-sensei!" Lee said cheerfully. Neji nodded politely. They both looked at Naruto, noticing the tight, feminine clothes and long hair. "Who's that girl with you, Kurenai-sensei?" Neji asked curiously. "Is she a shinobi?" asked Lee. "Yes," Kurenai said with a sly smile. "She's a talented shinobi but a bit shy. She's under my training." "Oh, I must say she's quite pretty," said Rock Lee. Kurenai chuckled. "Yes, she's cute, isn't she?" she said, glancing at Naruto with a knowing smile. "What's your name?" Neji asked. Naruto was nervous. His voice would give him away, but Kurenai jabbed him sharply. "Answer him, sweetie," she commanded gently. "M-my name is Narumi," he mumbled in a high-pitched voice. Neji and Lee nodded, not suspecting anything. They had no idea "Narumi" was actually Naruto. "It's nice to meet you, Narumi," Lee said with a friendly smile.

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It seems like it’s higher quality to me. Although, I have to say. What was the purpose of doing the “pervy sage bit?” It, to me, felt like the story would have flowed better if we stuck to one character Naruto meets this time. Since he later speaks to Rock Lee. It seems like we could have just had him either see Rock Lee from the start, or just replace Rock Lee with pervy sage. (Which might flow better given pervy sages personality. Rock Lee was never the kind of guy to talk to girls so… flirty? Pervy Sage would maybe work better since it makes more sense for his character and would be more embarrassing and personal for Naruto.) Final note: I am not a writer. Please take my comment with a grain of salt. There is a fair chance I simply don’t know what I’m talking about.

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>>143746659

Well previously I was going to use pervy sage as a reason to punish Naruto to take more dose however I thought this might be better for the story

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>>143746659

I don't think lee flirted ok this part or the story he likes just compliment Naruto nothing else but yeah I am also new to writing and I do make mistakes 😅

Bimbo Bambi
>>143746659

That is fair. And again, take my suggestions with a grain of salt. I do like the idea of Naruto being forced to take more doses. Especially as punishments for small mistakes (like the serving himself food along with Kurenai.) And the idea of pushing Naruto in the direction of the artwork image you made during the voting (the adult-baby Naruto one) seems like it would be fun. Or maybe pushing Naruto towards being made perfect for pervy sage? Could be a fun vote perhaps.