Business Casual | Page 21 | Process (Patreon)

Many times when I make a rough for a page that has 3 or 4 panels, even if it's bombastic, I cross my arms and go "it just doesn't look like enough is happening...". 

I really wanted the sideways thrust pose to be in the center of the page, but then I pushed it to the left because it seemed to make more sense there, and I liked the overall composition. Then I had second thoughts about the last panel-- the first pose is a flat side-view, and the final panel is a flat front view, and I wanted to shake up the poses.

Then I felt like maybe just a bit more dialogue was needed out of Luis before he goes all the way inside, so I put him back in the center to give space for another panel. Then the final panel went through a couple iterations... Even the angle of the penis in the internal shot changed 4 times. Am I thinking too hard?