Side Dishes: Chapter 2: Page 24 (Patreon)
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It wasn't in the original suggestion, but I chose to add the line at the end about Lily wanting to reconnect with her crew... I figured the story would progress a little better if we pushed for a reason for everyone to reconnect and work together on a common goal. There's a lot of different options for what could happen next... whether we want to look at all the little steps or if it would be better to jump ahead a ways. We could continue with Lily easily, or check in on her crew to see how they're getting along with the Nah-Ri, or we could even check in on the monster girls.
Speaking of the monster girls, there are still a lot of decisions to be made about them. I deliberately made the demon into a futa... partly so I could just draw the little demon hyroglyph with a massive horse cock. But what about the nymph? I kind of made a point of covering her crotch with her costume design just so we could decide whether or not she's also a futa. For the slime girl I figure it's a moot point, since she's a shapeshifter anyway, so whether or not she has a cock is just a matter of choice. Are there any suggestions as far as names for the monster girls? And what do you think their personalities should be like... should they be evil? Or just misunderstood? Are they trying to take over the island? Or destroy it? Or maybe they're just trying to escape. This page feels like it's a real jumping off point... I think it's basically the first page that really sets up a clear goal and a challenge to be faced.