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Side Dishes: Chapter 2: Page 40 (Patreon)

Published:
2015-11-23 04:50:42
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2022-01

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I'm happy with this option winning, since it gets nearly all of our major players all in one location, and I think something like that is the key to bringing this story to a solid conclusion. I was kind of surprised, though, since this page is almost entirely setup without any "action" in it. Lol not that I'm complaining... I'm actually kind of happy to have a bit of an easy page for change. I'm curious to see what everyone's suggestions for tomorrow will be... I think Lily might have good chances of being able to get through to her crew, but that depends on what the fans want to see.

Tomorrow I'll be working on the last page of this first chapter of Banana Shortcake. After everything goes up on the main site I'll start up the next poll to decide what I'll be drawing for the second chapter.

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xBlackheart

Ughhh, I hate to be the negative nancy here on the first comment, but this is really bugging me about this chapter (and the dream sequence/lastest chapters of Banana Cream Cake). Whats bugging me is how its been jumping from scene to scene, sometimes right at the climax of the scene. I hate to say, but I had to go back and check if I had missed a page, because of the sudden shift, especially with the amount of growth and build up with it. I LOVE your style with showing growth sequence, and it truly does help convey and move the story and the narrative, to me atleast. Please, dont misunderstand me. I understand you want to tell as much of the story while moving the story along. I really do. Just, the best way I can describe this problem, is to use the most recent Godzilla movie. You have the story with the monsters, and the story with the humans. They bring the monsters together, they stare each other down, you're on the edge of your seat and....they cut to the child and the mother..

Shotred

Well I am glad that you like it, you see stuff like this of course can be done with no action in it. I know you like to have a faster pace going through scene by scene. Where for me I am more the type of having something flesh out and take your time when it sex scenes, action, characters talking and ect but hey your the artist. .......... In the first suggestion it starts off with Lily's crew jumping on Liliy and Bianca. We see Daphne pin Bianca down to ground doing a 69 position while Brunhilda sucking on Bianca balls while she is on the floor. Then we Lily pin down in a doggy position by liang she tries to talk to her crew but they wont listen and is interrupted by Liang's cock in her pussy. ............ For the second suggestion its off with Lily waking up and notice her arms is tied behind her back and laying on the side of the of the dinner table. She turns her head to side and see Bianca in the position sucking Brunhilda's cock over the dinner table while Daphne fucking her ass from behind. Lily then turn her face front and center and see liang's foreskin covered cock leaking cum in front of her face where Liang says "open wide captain". This time I made only two instead of three this time LOL

Shotred
>>1010536

I understand what you are coming from it can be over whelming especially when chapters are not updated all the in any medium but yeah that Godzilla movie had a whole other sorts of problems besides those LOL

bananacreamcake
>>1010545

lol I'm not sure about the idea of a dinner table and chairs... I feel like it doesn't really match the aesthetics of the Nah-Ri to have a table and chairs, since we saw earlier when they were eating their meals they just kneeled around a rug

Kenneth

Glad to see my second favorite option won. That said... I do agree largely with Blackheart. This jumping around is kind of killing the mood before a scene can reach its logical conclusion. And looking back its a situation that has only gotten worse as this story has gone on.

Alinoris

My suggestion for the next page and for the rest of this story arc. Next page: Brunhilde grabs Bianca's arms from behind, blocking them (so Bianca can't cast any spells) and in the meantime penetrates her, while Liang starts sucking Bianca's cock. Meanwhile Daphne is approaching an astonished Lily, who's asking what happened to the girls, why they have a cock now, etc. Bianca, who's getting increasingly horny, tells her that they must have eaten the sacred fruits and that the only way to stop their furious lust now (as she can't cast spells, which was Anastasia's original plan, in case some of you are wondering :p) is to make them cum enough to deplete their sexual stamina, or they (Bianca and Lily) will end up like Kat (totally exausted/blacked out). So Lily starts to BJ Daphne. About the rest of this story arc: after some time (and many orgasms :p), just when Lily feels that Daphne is reaching her limit, Bianca gets "finished" by a DP by Brunhilde and Liang and ends up like Kat. Final scene showing Lily who thinks she can't face all 3 girls together, even if they are now "weakened". Cut to the side room: Eve keeps fucking Anastasia, while Aqua fucks both of them, until the 2 women fall exausted on the floor. Aqua isn't fully satisfied and wants more sex, so she moves to the other room, just while Liang and Brunhilde are ready to assault Lily. This one is ready to take advantage of the new situation, saying that the girls should fuck a goddess and not a simple human girl (Lily is smart :p)...so a sexual assault on Aqua follows....[ from now on, I already wrote what might happen in a couple of previous posts ^^]. Sorry for the long text :p