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I was actually a little worried when I saw this suggestion doing so well, if only because it was probably the most difficult option for me to draw.  Lol although its usually the most difficult to draw pages that end up looking the most interesting. The poll didn't offer any specifics on this crew of women that Lisette comes across, so I figured I might as well use the crew of our other ill-fated ship from the previous chapter of Side Dishes. Anyway, at this point every girl has had a chance to get involved in the action... I think at this point it would be best to spend a page or two with Bianca and Lisette (and maybe the Moonlily crew?) , then focus on getting all the characters together for a finale. 

Although there is one thing to think about with this page... since the alien already has at least one active breeding chamber,  should there be multiple adult aliens on the ship? Or would it better to keep just one adult alien and the rest are still the cock-like worms? Or would it make more sense for the prime alien to be the "Queen", and none of the other aliens develop quite into her form. Or do we want to go even further and reveal that the alien in the story is just one worker, and the true Queen hasn't been revealed yet? Lol I don't think that's the best idea, if only because of our intent to make this chapter shorter, but if the readers are passionate about seeing this story extended then I'm open for it.

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Shotred

Nice talk about a alternate universe cameo LOL My first suggestion: We see Bianca still plowing Lisette ass while lifting her in the air, after that we see four smaller aliens that look like the Alien queen come in the room. All four of the aliens have are 4ft tall with some small changes to them like one with bigger tits, smaller head tentacles, different skin color, and one with huge balls. Liesette realize that those smaller aliens where the cock slugs that came out of the eggs. Bianca tells Lisette that "during there second stage these aliens tend to get more hungry and horny to her ear and that the alpha in pack gets firsts on there fresh prey. You see three of the aliens leap on the Moonlily crew one sucking on Bruhilda breast, one sucking on Liang cock, and the other up top of Daphine head crossing having its legs crossing sucking on the aliens. Then Lisettes see the Alpha alien with the huge balls leaping towards her at the end of the panel... ----------- Second suggestion while Bianca lifting Lisette of the ground still fucking her ass, Bianca brings her close to the Moonlily and begins to suck off and drink each of there cum. Bianca then does tell Lisette that it's time to take you to the mistress..... -----The third suggestion While Bianca is still fucking Lisette, Lisette notices a stun gun and a muscle relaxer strapon laying on the the floor. Lisette try to break free then was able to grab the stun gun and shot Bianca with last of the power that was lift in the gun. This knocks out Bianca face down while ass up on the floor. The last part of the panel we see Lisette putting on the strapon setting it to stun charging towards Bianca's pussy.

bananacreamcake

I think the first idea seems like just a little too much to fit into one page... when I add that to the poll list I think I"ll leave out the last shaot of the Alpha alien... I think I might be able to fit the rest of that into one page, though it will still be a bit cramped

Nitewolf

The alien queen and Jackie find Bianca and Lissete. The alien queen proceeds to start fucking lissetes pussy. The impregnation of Lissete causes her breasts to grow far larger and immediately leak milk, which causes the baby aliens to start feeding from her. Meanwhile Jackie is sucking the cocks of the other crew members and asks the queen if she can let them go and have them join in the fun.

Kenneth

Regard story length. Maybe once you hit say page 15 you can start adding a vote option to leave the current story and pull back to the goddess narrator to change to a different "reality".

Kenneth

I like Nick's idea of having some smaller aliens enter into the story. But I see a way to make a couple amendments to make it more streamlined of a page. Make it a trio of aliens each about the size of Lisette. (Having four of them just feels like they will start to clutter.) each with a unique characteristic; one with large breasts, one with very long head-tentacles that reach the floor, and one with huge balls. And have them not descriminate between Lilisette and Bianca, attacking them both. What say you Nick?

Alinoris

If I can jump into this idea...while Bianca fully inserts her cock into Lisette's ass and licks her ear (Lisette's weak point...and Bianca knows it :p), making her squirt from pleasure, the 3 smaller aliens come out from the 3 trapped girls (that is their belly is like a sort of kangaroo's pouch for the "second stage-aliens"), each one with features taken from their own "mother": so, the one with larger breasts comes out from Daphne, the one with longer head-tentacles from Liang (because of her "manipulative/astute" attitude) and the one with bigger cock/balls and muscles from Brunhilde. The 3 girls might also cum during the process, spraying Bianca and Lisette, making them even hornier, if possible :p

Alinoris

About this option, maybe Jackie might focus her attentions on Brunhilde only (strong girl with strong girl...possibly they also know each other since the military academy and were lovers) and the alien queen might find interesting to see the 2 taller and stronger human females having sex and later pleasuring her, as further proof of her total domination.