(Maho Noir) edited pages (Patreon)

Since I've only done to completion these four pages, I decided to go back and edit them to get Ran's hair here to where I was happy.

It actually required a lot of redrawing... plus on page two I redrew the last Ran entirely as she came off far colder towards Fizee than I was intending so now she's softened a lot in that panel.