Anniversary Story Outline (Patreon)

We're on the way, folks! This is just a very rough draft of the story, but I want to get some feedback to make sure it's on the right track for everyone. Please let me know in the comments or through the options how you feel about it so far. Suggestions are appreciated.

The reason this is a poll is for those that aren't comfortable commenting their thoughts.

Available for all patrons since, you know, it's a story for all of you.