Undercover ASSignment: Omega Update (Patreon)

The restructure update. Thanks to your feedback last week, I've done some editing to the movie. For the most part, most scenes were only reduced by about 5-10 seconds. Longer scenes such as 2, 5, 8, 9, and 13 had reductions of about 20 seconds or more. The biggest change is that I think I will cut scenes 10 and 11 entirely as they were fairly redundant and got in the middle of the krogan scenes. Additionally, I think a shortened scene 13 will make more sense if it comes before scene 12.

The revision comes out to about 17 minutes 32 seconds. That's not including the intro. All in all, still quite a long movie, but more manageable. This could still change as it's animated, but this is probably about as short as it will go. ZeroDiamonds has a lot of lovely audio, and it would be difficult to cut any more.

Some dialogue has been cut, but I haven't revised the script. For now, here's a simple txt of the scene by scene breakdown.