Bucking is magic: The treasure at the end of the rainbow, Part 1 (Patreon)

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The first part, the introduction of this story is finished. I am very curious to hear your opinion . I really want to know where I could improve or where it is good as it is.

For me, it's so much fun to work on this project, much more fun than the animations, and to be honest I'm quite happy with how it turned out and I can't wait to work more on it... of course if you want to you see more.