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Scenes (Hentai Story 3) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-10-07 21:00:30
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2024-11
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Sorry! I forgot about the scene.

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Artur

basic question: where is the Hinata part itself because I see there is a combination of two parts (it won't change my opinion on this matter anyway, edit hinata sex sec is less then 1min after re-checking and it is very little) add the Hinata part itself EDIT:I checked it for the second time and it looks like this: story-(hinata part 47 sec) -too long Naruto (female-47 sec) too long Naruto (female-10 sec sex )......... Hinata -BJ scene(56 sec part 1) Naruto (female-21 sec sex ) Hinata BJ(21 sec part 2 ) Naruto (female-sex 16 sec) Hinata (BJ 13 sec part 3 ) Naruto (female- sex 10 sec) Hinata (BJ- 7 sec part 4) Naruto (female- sex 25 sec ) Hinata (BJ-18 sec part 5 ) Hinata (intro-16 sec - so many sec weren't needed at all) Hinata (sex without moving - 11 sec -no comment ) Hinata (real sex- 32 sec - sex position 1, sex position 2-15 sec and here it was a good idea to use one sex position, this one because it's better) so I've written the order of what's happening in this scene and now the summary: anyway the story is too long scenes from naruto (female is: the sex scene is too long (82 sec) I would prefer hinata to have a longer scene than this) Hinata BJ scene- 115 sec - after checking again and it's still too much Hinata sex scene sex without moving - 11 sec was unnecessary and at the corner sex scene with Hinata Hinata -sex only 47 sec is TOO LITTLE !!!!!!! many things are unnecessary here like too many BL scenes, and too much story, the intro was not necessary at all, you have a lot to improve although your style of making scenes is very good, a touch is needed in these things that I mentioned earlier, that's it... 3-/5

ClubNTR
>>151680512

You study the scenes more carefully than me))). Thanks for the criticism, we will try to improve.