Controlled pg 8 (aka 'B.E.Shampoo' re-draw ) (Patreon)

Here is page eight of the re-make of this comic. This is also the page that the original series was missing due to some Deviantart transgression it made. (See added on image.) While the story thus far has slipped away from the 'instant TF' aspect of the original run, I am hoping to do a little world building with this re-make. Please tell me what you think so far and I promise you, the fun stuff is about to start. :P