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This page was a little wordy. . . But it does a small re-set. And thanks to a comment from the last page, I did a quick edit to the dialogue and drawing. They indeed do have a little time before the clean up crew come.

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Bob Johnson

I hate to make a comment as it is very likely my fault but the third panel dialogue "Your back pain goes away." doesn't seem to fit. Maybe it is missing a word?

immortaltom

I can see your point. I did a little edit to the dialog and think it works a little better. thank you for taking the time to offer a suggestion. I am always open to hear what people have to say and any editing details I may miss or can improve. :D Cheers.