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Aftermath (Patreon)

Published:
2018-03-08 21:53:54
Imported:
2024-05
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Well, kinda. Not exactly a story behind it, just some funny tests for the future.

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Randochi

Top: "Hey Bamby, look, are these the pink underpants you used as a kid?" "Where did you find those?" "Doesn't your mother buy them for you?" Bottom: "I eat my words" (To retract, regret, or feel foolish about what one has previously said.)

Randochi

I find this comic a bit confusing at first cause I can't read the Spanish and had a friend translate it for me. I think there should be a little more added to the picture for those who cant read can convey the message without the words. A comic should also tell a story with image only, the words just add substance. In the top image I think we should beable to see a nest on a branch above their heads and something not very important (like a feral bird or a squirrel near the nest) And then the nest on bambi's head and the broken eggs on Ronno's head on the 2nd photo. Also the text bubble would benefit on the left of Ronno instead of over Bambi's head to avoid confusion on who's talking.

AtlasfielD
>>10676646

Is not exactly a comic, in fact I made the egg battle days later. It was not prepared. =P