On Vacation (Patreon)

One week of vacation has gone by, and a good week it was. I visited friends, relaxed, wrote, and watched Star Wars.

So on with the review.

Star Wars: The force Awakens, was a great movie. It definitely recaptures the feeling of Episode 4 to 6, sometime a little too closely. Over all it's the Story of Finn and Rey, two orphans due to different circumstances who are forced together and then get mixed up in something bigger than both of them.

We get old characters coming back, and they aren't just back for show, they have a history and baggage that come with them. We get new characters some of whom we don't get to see enough in the movie, so hopefully they will get more time in the next one. The movie was very satisfying, even with a couple of flaws.

I Already paid full price to see it again, and I'd pay it for a 3rd time.

on the writing front.

first off, I have modified part 2 of Missing son, I wrote a chapter this week that is in the middle of it. The link is still the same to reach it:

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4vQ-LxGi-e4ZHFQTUwwMzR0Vkk

And I did more work on Missing son, 8 chapters (9 if I include the one that's in part 2 now) Over all it's coming along nicely, it's already almost the same size the outline is, and there's still half the outline to go.

Part 3

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4vQ-LxGi-e4UXYtS29oSERxdGc

I also started a story, as well as a whole story world. The story is called 'A Marking' I expect it to be on the short side, It's a transformation story, and it will be pornographic. I'm calling the world the story takes place in 'The Changing World' and I'm going to use it to put any transformation story I come up with there.

A Marking, part 1

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4vQ-LxGi-e4TzEyRW54ZlNqUkU

On the editing front,

The Society has gone through my Beta Readers and they left me a lot of comments. I probably won't start the rewrite this week, since they still have a day or two, and then I want to take the time to read through the comments. but next week at the latest I'll start on them.

Also, I'll be putting 'A Wasteful Death' to the test with them before sending it to my editor.

I've attached the latest version of the Cover for Tristan. The changes left are minor, so I'm hoping it will be done withing the week, after that I'll start the process to publish it

That's basically it. See you next week