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Buck faces a difficult decision. Should he reveal his true identity to the man he loves, even if it may mean the end of their relationship?

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CallSignElle

Hi! The file isn't saved as a PDF because the computer thinks the file type is .comiclife. Just thought I should let you know!

Belle

Wow! One wonders if the Costume Shop may regret it…

Jacen Moore

DAWWWWW 😍 😍

Alexia

It's a nice story but maybe it should progress a little bit faster? This whole episode is just about the hero hesitating to tell the truth.

Shaun Foraker

Wonder if the support agents are gonna do anything to the hero anymore or if the bad guy is gonna do something to him now that he knows the truth

Taylor Galen Kadee

Pacing is always a challenge. I felt like it would be difficult for Buck to admit who he really was, and I didn't want to gloss over it. To me, there are two issues for him: One is his lingering shame that he, formerly an alpha male, has found himself not only a submissive female, but in love with a man he once went up against mano a mano. One he considered a worthy but inferior adversary. Secondly, he is afraid of rejection from the man he now loves. So, I felt it would be hard for him to confess and, to me, there should be some tension and drama in him making the choice. Buck is making what will be a life changing decision, letting himself be vulnerable and putting his future happiness in the hands of Warren! Just explaining my thoughts. I never seek to deny a reader's right to react to the story as they will. As always, I do thank you for your feedback.

Jacen Moore

And when will chapter 11 be?

Alexia

Be sure that the story you wrote matches your intent. And I think it is a great and nice TG story and I fully understand why Buck hesitated to tell the truth. I just have the feeling that the pace is a little bit slow currently, but this is just fine tuning. Thank for sharing your insights, it was an interesting reading.