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Brother Bewitched 31 (Patreon)

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2024-01-26 05:00:06
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2024-04-06 12:13:24
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Asryn has known Serren since the two were little boys. How will he react now that Serren is a shapely young maiden?

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Dpat

#TeamDevin

Joe Blow78

I am also team devin

findesiecle

The combination of pride and vanity on display in Serena's facial expressions on pages #3 and #4...nice touch. The lighting of Nemiria's face on pages #8, #9 and #10, WOW! Her openly, gleefully malign smile as she further feminizes Serena...very reminiscent of all the mad scientist close-up scenes I have viewed in film! Page #12. Serren, not just Serena, likes what he sees. Showing how transfixed he was with his stunning (increasing?) beauty by having him hold the pose from #12 on to #13 as well...great storytelling. Page #16...lol! You should have had a thought bubble to accompany Serena's dialogue balloon containing the sentence, "I can't wait to tease the shit out of Asryn!" Pages #18, #19 and #20...no joking around...she's as serious as cancer beneath the fake smile and whimsical words, ready to test out her new powers on Asryn, soon to be one of her simps. A eon passed between page #27 and page #29... Poor Asryn...he ain't ever gonna get some of that Serena loving...

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>128060984

Thanks for the feedback! I have been trying to use the images to tell the story as in #12 and #13, as you noted and that goes with the facial expressions as well. I also had a lot of fun lighting Nemeria's face with the mad scientist look! Yes. Asryn is doomed. Serren is way out of his league!

findesiecle
>>128060984

I was best friends with a girl, Kerry, when I was around eleven-years-old. She was a bit of a tom-boy at the time, but we were actual buddies, and I can't tell you how much pure fun we had during our adventures together! We remained friends through junior-high, and continued to have fun until the summer before we entered high-school. She ghosted me at that point. When we were both freshman, she had transformed into a sex goddess in just a few short months. She would barely even say hello to me then. Asryn is in for an ass-kicking.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>128060984

I am sorry that happened. Bummer. Serren is starting to realize that the traits which made Asryn a good sidekick for him when he was a guy make him not such a good choice as a knight in shining armor!

findesiecle
>>128060984

The acknowledgement of the true human nature is a painful thing. Good authors, like you, don't shrink away from that challenge, but somehow manage to encase it in palatable, metaphorical doses.

Alexia

I remember a time when I was busy delivering feedback but there is no need anymore: nice people went before me and they formulated very well my own thoughts and feelings... So I just lazily read the comments and add ♥️...

Alexia

About Asryn : I made my mind about him a long time ago... Whatever the version of the story, he always fails as a guy... In the very first version, he ends up as a girl and actually it fits him well...

Taylor Galen Kadee

LOL. Serren is starting to see things your way. If only he weren't so afraid of how Devin makes him feel.

Alexia
>>128349546

Serren's new dress is fine, but, as often, a little bit too sophisticated according to my personal tastes. I would like him to wear a simple dress for a change. As the beautiful one worn by Nemeria, for example. Or even simpler.

Alexia
>>128349546

Back on my own comment : Finally this new dress is really nice. It goes very well on Serenina's body, both from the front and the back. By comparison, Nemeria's dress is stiff. How is it that I have changed my mind? Initially, I viewed Serenina's dress in the episode's final scenes, where she sports a dramatic hairstyle that I'm not particularly fond of. And this "contaminated" my assessment on her dress. However, upon reviewing the episode's opening panels, where Serenina gets a more conservative hairstyle, my perspective on her dress shifted for the better.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>128349546

Ahhh. Interesting. I had chosen that first hairstyle with the notion that Nemeria had just put his hair up to facilitate getting him out of his first dress and into the new! One of the things I liked about the new dress with all the little details-- laces and bows and the embroidery. Thanks for the feedback. When I started this comic, I decided Serren should never be seen in the same dress twice, so hopefully I won't run out of options before the story is done!

Alexia
>>128349546

It's a nice idea but don't push it too far. Don't let this 'dress chalenge' you put on yourself interfer with your storytelling. I am pretty sure that noone mind if Serren has favorite dresses. The pink one at the very start. Or the black one. Or the last emoidered one. And he can borrows some, maybe?

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>128349546

That might be fun of he borrows one of Nemeria's dresses. Or she talks him into wearing one because she wants to see what he looks like dressed like her. I may bring that first dress back at some point since it is such a classic princess dress.

Joseph c guillory

I wonder how many male suitors will we after him as a bride prisoner or slave Or harem girl. great art as always And did you or did you not show him slowly turning into a woman And did her close Fall off or burst off and be dragged off by guards? And please tell me the next chapter is coming soon.

Joseph c guillory

Oh Are you gonna show serena's father in the mirror soon his ghost And look at a Sun now daughter and say for shame you got trick like this.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>128714480

I did show that scene! The clothes were magically vaporized, mainly because DAZ wouldn’t cooperate with other options, though I have some new tools so… The next chapter is coming soon. Just need to finish up a new Supersistef.

Joseph c guillory

Congratulations on getting your site back on Amazon. I'm happy for you.

Joseph c guillory

Please tell me when the next book is coming out

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>129461035

I just released Swap APP a few days ago. Maybe in another week or two I will put something else out. I'm trying to pace myself so people have time to read one before a new one comes out. Here's a link to my author central page: https://www.amazon.com/author/cooperkadee

Joseph c guillory

Ok thank you for telling me and again congratulations on getting back on amazon....but I would love to know how you 🏆 your website on amazon back.

Taylor Galen Kadee
>>129552344

I just kept asking and finally they said yes. I combined my two names. One of my transgressions in the past, and I didn’t even know it was against the rules, was having two different accounts. Hopefully, I won’t mess up again.