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a transformation story 

by curious4ever

A boy who never leaves his home finds a world behind a magic mirror where two legged deer live. 


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Jan

wonderful story :)

TNTCactus

Amazing story, and really cute :3

aotake kes

Cool i like it ! And very well written, enjoyed every page and it was not boring ... I love the Bonk Bonk idea. Thanks for sharing this story, I would love to see more stories in this form. Great work curios4ever !!!!!

JG

What a fantastic story. I loved every part. I enjoyed how Jace first slowly physically transformed into Tupper and then mentally. But he really didn't mentally become Tupper, but just a normal deer like all the others. The bonk bonk scene was great and so was the illustration and also the scene with him starting to fall in love. He got to do so many things in this world that were not possible in his own. Both of their lives were improved with the switch. And my favorite part is how the illustration at the beginning matches up beautifully with the beginning and end scenes. One is seen from Jace's eyes as a human and the other as seen from his eyes as a deer. The deer's reactions were exactly the same during both encounters. As much as Jace thought he wanted to go home he would have been miserable once he went back and he thought about all the fun times he had as a deer. I wouldn't mind trading places with one of those deer myself. I hope we get to see more stories like this. Kudos to you both.

Maxwell Stevenson

Another wonderful collab between you two! What a wonderful journey this has been! At first it thought it would be the classic shenanigan about the magic mirror turning you in what you're seeing on the other side, but it appears that i was completely wrong! I loved the twist about the exchanging bodies and knowledges slowly happening to Jace in becoming his own version of Tupper. And yeah... is he really became Tupper? Or is he just another version of Tupper? One who's more integrated with the actual world he lives in. I also thought about that maybe, at the beginning, the actual Tupper (Old Jace) WAS ACTUALLY the real Tupper who exchanged with Jace (now new Jace) at the start and they forgot about it. That's why Tupper was so different from the other deers and Jace looked so ill-fitting for the human world. Maybe they already exchanged in the past and they forgot, and now they're back the their original worlds and original forms. One thing tho... I think New Jace is losing more than New Tupper, to be completely honest. I would probably love to live a simpler and happier life, rather than the complicate mandala of this human world :3