Disintegrity 35 remakstered ! (Patreon)

Ok. So. Here's the thing. i said I would do the pages in order from now on. But I hadn't noticed that page 30 wasn't done either. OOOOH well. Next time page 30.

So what changed and why, I don't hear you ask --since this is a pre-written text and I can't hear you through the internet since I have turned the microphone that's under your bed off. Well, not that much and everything. As usual. The background stayed the same, some sounds remained, otherwise it's all new but it's fundamentally the same page beside that.

Panel 1 is not worth talking about, panel 2 is zoomed out and the chocolate isn't immediately on his face so that we can see Zee's expression andit's slightly easier to parse what's going on, panel 3 is mostly the same except the shadows aren't anywhere near as dramatic I suppose which does give the scene a slightly different tone but I like the brightness better, finally panel 4 is also zoomed out.

The most immediately noticeable change is that I added a lot of blank space in between the panels. I think it's easier on the eye, makes the page less busy-looking and it makes the second panel's splashy shape stand out more

That's it !