Disintegrity 87 HD + 94-95 remade ! (Patreon)
Content
First off, the HD page :
The before after folder : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1rqvbs0AhHkXSvBJQgKu35UspVeCur6CM?usp=sharing
The just after folder : https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1axdXteUc7pbZZD6PljuDC7JINqTEkRoV?usp=sharing
The remade pages have seen few changes really worth talking about. they're also relatively unimpressive pages all in all and have remained mostly the same. Still ! Let's get into it !
I wanted to give a different impression in 94 because I thought the sploojshot felt over and done with kinda quick. So the first panel bleeds into the second one to make the time spent seeeeeeeeem less clear cut. Which is literally true since the panel itself is less clear cut. Plus anothe shot of the splooj pool, just for the sake of slowing the pace down. I've also removed the dialogue altogether because it never goes anywhere for one, looked awful for two and I just wanted the moment to not be undercut so soon for three. So Zee stays silent !
Until 95 that is, where the dialogue is changed again and is more in continuation with the way they were talking before, which makes Larsen's silence sound like the scene is shifting tone more clearly that it was with the old Zee dialogue. Otherwise, all the changes are obvious enough to not warrant detailing. Cos yaknow. You can just look. The head is turned differently. That's it. that's the change.
Anyway, that's about it. I'll probably post the suggestion call tomorrow so you can already prepare whatever awfully filthy suggestion you would have me draw !