Disintegrity 117 remake (Patreon)
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There's not too much to say about this page, you can tell it's basically the same. But I'll still detail some stuff out cos it actually took me some work, probably more than it deserved since the old one wasn't thaaaat bad except for one big problem. I probably could have given less effort to get that one done but oh well....
A bunch of the panels are entirely redone, even the background, starting with the first one. There was nothing too wrong with it but a general problem with the entire page : the characters look too small compared to the background. Otherwise I just tried to give Dani and Marcus (I think the snail's name is Marcus, it's been a while) a little more personality fitting to their dialogue.
It's in panel 4 and 5 that you can see how disproportionate the size of the couch was compared to Zee in particular. It's one of those issue I noticed years ago and has been bothering me ever since... But it's fixed now ! I even gave Zee a sexier pose in panel 4, not that the moment necessitates a sexy pose at all. But whatever, he looks better.
Really, that's about it. I don't know if I'll start working on the june poll winner or a Bromance Done page next but both comics are nearing their ends now. I think DIsintegrity is like 5 pages away from being done and Bromance done, 2 ? It's gonna be weird for me.