Fat and Horror. Marley's Story. Page 22-23. Full and clean versions. (Patreon)

Well, we can say that this story of Merlin has ended / Yes, there will be an afterword, and nevertheless. The main plot Is Over. 

I hope you liked it. I didn't want to turn this story into a depressing serious drama, so I tried to make it a little easier and added elements of comedy.  

 The detective component did not come out as pronounced as I originally wanted. 

I didn't plan such a finale initially, probably until the appearance of my grandmother in the form of a ghost. Initially, I planned a darker ending, Nini also joined Marley in it, but for different reasons. 

In some versions of the ending, Marley had to fight with the distraught ghost of her grandmother and kill him. No, as for mn, it looked so artificial that I refused it.

At the beginning of the work, Nini's name was Yuki and she should not have joined Marley, it should have been done by another ghost, in another story. 

Starting this story, I planned to keep within 8 pages, but starting to write the script, I realized that I would not keep within eight.