Metroid: the Bergman Affair Remaster Parts 20-24 (Patreon)

Samus is eaten, more or less. Then, she's hunted by an old rival. Trained by an old rival. And, finally, comes face to face with her most dangerous enemy.

I promised/threatened to do a re-edit of the Bergman Affair once I hit five hundred viewers. We're there. Re-edited chapters will be released sporadically, with sporadic art being offered by the impeccable skill of the great Meeps123h. I'll be cleaning up the language a little, expanding on some topics, tightening up others. The first few chapters will be freebies, and then I'll veer into the story being subscriber-exclusive for all levels.

This was the first smutfic I ever wrote, a challenge from a cousin coupled with my disdain for the wasted opportunity that was Other M. It goes a little deep into the Metroid lore that was available at the time, and draws from pretty much everything that was available when it was published.

I hope you're enjoying it.

Mia Xen was created by Comicaptor2023 as part of his extended Metroid universe, which ran for two glorious seasons. The rest of this stuff all exists in the Metroid canon.

Next week, we kick off September with the last part of Mine, Hermione and begin something new.

Chapter 20 has 2, 766 words.
Chapter 21 has 3, 835 words.
Chapter 22 has 2, 130 words.
Chapter 23 has 2, 583 words.
Chapter 24 has 2,256 words.