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Altering Curse Spinoff 2 - Suggestion Thread #3: Because Timmy turned into Timmantha during sports she finds herself in the girls locker room. What happens next? (Patreon)

Published:
2021-03-18 18:10:04
Edited:
2021-03-18 18:10:41
Imported:
2021-03

Content

I hope you all saw the 23 WIP pages with added dialogue, if you haven't please read through them before suggesting anything :) 

[Google Drive Folder featuring all the sketched pages for easier reading]

With that out of the way, welcome to the third comic suggestion thread for this comic!

You got the following options to suggest further changes and plot-points, use the appropriate tags so it's easier to categorize later on :)

TAGS:

AC (Anti Cosmo): Tags suggestions that deal with corruption/changes Anti Cosmo does without the doing of the necklace. These changes don't have to do with the necklace which only activates when someone says something. Means you got all the lewd creative freedom you want!

N (Necklace): Tags suggestions that deal with changes that happen when the necklace gets activated (making whatever gets said, true). Please add what is said to the suggestion, else I can't work with it properly!

PP (Plotpoint): Tags suggestions that progress the story further without any changes.

If you want to suggest something complex you can mix the tags of course :) I don't want to limit your imagination in any way!

I'll close this suggestion thread as soon as I'm done with half of the currently sketched pages, the poll that features the suggestions I like will get posted afterwards and runs till all the pages are done :)

Comments

Petra

Personally for once I want to see a gender bender that doesn't change the persons sexual orientation but magnifies it instead so maybe make her start oogling the ladies even more?

schinkn
>>55864101

I think she easily ends up being bisexual sooner or later without changing her, so I don't think this qualifies as a suggestion ^^ I don't want her to be purely attracted to men ^^

Akira

N : I would add on Petras idea but more so she gets turned on by the ladies and men. Adding on to this Trixie could make some comments improving her clothes or fashion style maybe we could see the introduction of Tootie right next to Timmanthas locker adding in a bit more interaction with the ladies

Petra

Perhaps the same way Angel Dust is on Hazbin Hotel he prefers men but if he really has to he could do women at least how I've heard his sexual orientation be described as

OozeRocket

N/PP First I think that Timmi should get some memories of this new reality so that she knows where her locker his and all that to not be awkward in the locker room. Then have Trixie try to hit on her or ask her if she wants to go to a sleep over or something along the lines. Timmi, wanting everything to go back to normal says no and trixie walks away mad at timmi cause she has a slight crush on her and wants to get a 3 way going. When she gets back to the other popular girls she says something along the lines of “why can’t Timmi be more fun like the rest of us” this would just change timmi’s personality to more of a bisexual/lesbian girly girl.

Rob greener

Necklace: some of the girls start gossiping and one says Timmi is such a slut and she changes to fit that description

Bal tha mele

A jealous joke turns into an argument in the locker room causing the amulet to change many of the girls according insults and comments. "She's a cow" "She's a slut" "She's loose" "Timmantha loves anal" "She love cum", etc.

Z

One of the girls could flaunt and taunt Timmi about her lack of curves: “Don’t you wish you had some of what I have?/wish you were more like me?”

schinkn
>>55864434

Hmm, adding Tootie? Sounds interesting indeed :) Would have to age her up though and come up with a way/change to make that Tootie appearance happen ^^

schinkn
>>55865183

I wanted to give her new memories as her brain adjusts to this new reality she's in :) She'll find her locker that's for sure lol. Besides that I am totally on board for her acting more girly and being bisexual lol

schinkn
>>55874130

I think Veronica would spread rumors like that. Maybe she's argueing with Trixie about Timmi because she wants Trixie all for herself. Maybe in a sentence or two she calls Timmi a slut and changes ensue. I am not sure how intense that sluttiness should be. I am all for slow changes in that comic so making her a depraved slut from the start won't work lol I think if this one wins I will make her sluttier in fashion style and mind. Just enough to make her stare at some crotches and muscles of men and tits n' ass when it's a woman and get a little wet lol

schinkn
>>55884599

Sounds nice! It'll be difficult to conceptualize such a scenario but I think it's manageable. I think Veronica would start an argument due to her wanting Trixie all for herself. Some other girls may join in which results in 4-5 girls arguing. I am not sure what changes should happen and what changes are still too much at this early stage. The argument should be believeable sooo.. I can get why someone is calling someone a cow due to their enhanced proportions, the slut callout is not that far fatched as well. Not sure if the "Timmantha loves anal" would fit. I know she got a plump behind now lol but I don't know if they would say something like that. If Timmantha is the reason they fight there might be a possibility that Veronica smack talks her so it might be possible, the question is if we should go with the "Anal" smacktalk or if she says something else lol

schinkn
>>55895011

I like that idea. I already have a scenario for it in my head where either Veronica or another girl taunts her while she already changed into her regular bra. They first call her "as flat as a board" which results in her breasts diminishing into nothingness until she says "You wish that you got some of what I have! But some of us are blessed some of us... don't haha" said the girl pointing at her. Due to her phrasing Timmi wishes for exactly what the girl said, making her breasts reappear even bigger than before (we should clarify how big lol, what did you have in mind) They are pressing against her bra that's too small now, maybe tearing it apart before reality adjusts morping it into a fitting one. Her ass gets a little boost as well :)

qwerpyblah

N: "Timmi" retrieves her regular clothes from her locker, only to find that the shift to being a girl has swapped in a very girly and revealing outfit(complete with jewelry and high heeled shoes), after she reluctantly puts it on, Trixie and Veronica come over and discuss Timmi's outfit and overall appearance, Trixie's complements are sincere(causing Timmi's clothes, shoes, & jewelry to become more girly and fashionable), while Veronica's complements are ironic and innuendo filled(causing her outfit to become even more revealing and slutty and also making her body and especially her face more like a slutty bimbo's), these comments cause a slightly lesser feedback effect on Trixie and Veronica as well affecting their outfits and bodies as well, the shifts in reality this causes results in Veronica's attitude towards Timmi to become somewhat more of a friendly rivalry than the more hostile attitude she was giving her earlier out on the track, and the two of them give Timmi an affectionate hug(that probably includes some groping and/or smooching) before leaving to go to their next class and tell her that they'll see her at lunch PP/N: Timmi goes to her next class worried about how much she's being changed, then she starts panicking cause she remembers that her next class has both Tootie and Remy Buxaplenty* in it and she just knows those two are going to cause her all sorts of complications thanks to the necklace *getting ahead a little(since this is merely setting up him appearing in the scene after this one) but I'm thinking unlike everyone else shown so far Remy would retain his memories of how things are supposed to be since he also has a Fairy God Parent, and while he's not completely immune to the necklace's effects or Anti-Cosmo's own more direct meddling, since he does have a Fairy present he does have some protection, things have been going a little too smoothly for Anti-Cosmo so having a potential stumbling block will shake things up nicely(particularly since Remy is a rival of Timmy's, so he'd still probably cause new problems for Timmi, like her having the sudden realization that he's actually kinda hot, especially if the necklace amplifies that), again this would be more for a later scene than what we're primarily discussing here, but it's the kind of idea that bears discussing a little early anyways

Cole jones
>>55864434

Maybe tootie could appear after school when she meets timmi while he's walking home.

Cole jones
>>55912617

I like the idea but while Remy is initially immune to the memory changes what if he can be changed to a girl too maybe his fairy could change too but just later in the classroom maybe Remy keeps pushing timmy and she says I wish would you were like my mom or something and it's the only change he says willing and of his own volition.

qwerpyblah
>>55912617

I was thinking more along the lines that he would stay a guy and that any changes would be more along the lines of him getting turned into a buff stud that's hung like a horse, Remy being an excellent choice for this sort of thing as he and Timmy have a very fun dynamic together and it's very easy to see how their rivalry could transform into something more lusty or even romantic due to the changes that are happening, and like I mentioned before this presents a good possible hiccup in Anti-Cosmo's plans, it'd get dull if everything ended up going his way, and indeed this could even end up being a path for this story to have a relatively happy ending(which I think would be a nice change of pace from many of Schinkn's other long form comics where things end a bit darkly for my tastes)

schinkn
>>55912617

Another nice idea :) I would tone down the sluttiness of Timmi's standard clothes. They could get sluttier after Veronica made her statements. I also enjoy the idea of implementing Remy and Tootie even though I think that Tootie should be an encounter that happens after school because of the slight difference in age. Besides that I think that it sounds quite logical to have Remy unchanged by all of the Reality Rewrites thus far. Would make for another nice "villain" of that comic. I mean if he knows that Timmi was Timmy before he may use the situation Timmi's currently in for his personal gain or to mess with her. Just speculation though. Besides that I know that most of my comics have bad endings but that's sorta my style since day one lol I can't tell you how this one will end up. I write in a pretty natural manner based on the changes people suggest. If the changes make her irreversable horny or something else it's just the way it is lol We will have to wait and see. She doesn't have to end up with Remy though, I think Trixie or one of her friends...maybe AJ are a better fit for her and aren't based on a preexisting rivalry.

schinkn
>>55864434

Would make more sense lol but it really depends on if AC decides to change things around or not because I think that noone will mention her in any way to make a locker of her appear right next to Timmantha's ^^

Akira
>>55912617

This probably is the best out of the bunch in the suggestions. I do agree with schinkns point of toneing down the sluttiness before the statement. Though it would probably be nice to have Trixie take her to the next class maybe seeing tootie along the way as foreshadowing and we could see Aj in the classroom with chester Another idea would be that Trixie could be applying makeup and could turn to apply some on Timmanthas face

Cole jones

AC/N something I want to suggest for after gym class maybe timmi goes to mr Crocker's class and through either anti cosmo or timmi's own volition says something about Crocker that changes him into a woman then other men in the class say things that start turning crocker into a bimbo teacher it could be the first time timmi causes a change on purpose but it could backfire and cause the new mrs. Crocker to say some things that either change just timmi or both timmi and some other characters in the class.

schinkn
>>60563045

I think this suggestion would fit for the next poll once the locker room chapter is done :)

Cole jones

AC/N timmi enters the locker room and tries to get to her locker as quick as possible but because of how the girls are now they keep saying stuff about each other like your such a slut or I wish my tits were as big as yours causing more changes to all the girls and when timmi gets to her locker at the end of the row it is between trixie and veronica's lockers and as timmi goes to grab her clothes to change into anti cosmo makes timmi grab trixie and veronica's asses trixie views it in a flirtatious way and veronica is more annoyed at timmi they both say some stuff not sure what that cause timmi to get slightly more curvy and as timmi changes into more normal clothes trixie says I do wish timmi dressed more reveling to show off her body resulting in timmi's clothes changing as she walks out into the halls.

GooPop

Trixxi spots Timmantha trying to hide her burgeoning tits and plump ass in the the shower of the locker room and gets an eye full of her purt nipples and mistakes that for Timantha being horny and masturbating instead of trying and failing horribly to cover herself up while she showers as everything is still very visibile. Trixie says quite loudly on the other side of the shower wall but well within ear shot of the necklace to all the other girls "You know I heard Timantha's mom was a late bloomer but look at her now she has amazing curves, I bet Timantha is the same way I mean look how horny she is using a dildo in the showers while we are all here. I hear thats how it started for her mom, she became insatiably horny and would masturbate often and that kicked off her puberty, and then her tits became huge and milky. She wasn't even pregnant but I guess thats what happens when your family has generations of wet nurses in it. They just develop huge milk filled titties on their own." So hearing all this instead of using soap in the shower it morphs into a dildo and timantha starts actively masturbating with it, then she reflects the "thicc" or "curvy" comment about her mom and how masturbation trigger her moms albeit late bloomer but explosive puberty which cause her to fill how and become thicker and have a bigger ass and jucy pussy, and then she develops new memories of her families generational heritage of being well known wet nurses and how all the women in her family developed huge racks that naturally were heavily laden with milk even without pregnancy. So first her nipples darken considerably from the hot pink I figure they were before to a very dark pink along with her areola followed shortly by dribbles of milk which turns into fully on squirts of milk when she tugs her nipples and as she does so while openly masturbating with the dildo in the shower her nipples become just a bit bigger to go along with the wet nurse thing plus the "eye full" of perky nipple Trixie "claimed" to see. As she does this her tits become huge rivaling any of the girls at school and certainly competing with her moms tits because she is "her mothers daughter" as Trixie had stated earlier and she most definitely takes after her in the wet nurse capabilities department as all the women in her bloodline have. Which also causes her to have a breastfeeding addiction and a set future of being a horny slutty wet nurse once she is out of school.

schinkn
>>61813263

This suggestion hits all the marks for me XD I mean I love all the transformation themes you use and the way it's build up. Just a few additions and maybe a few segments where I would tone down the changes to have some opportunities later on for her to change. Before Trixie talks about Timmi's mom we could let the girls gossip about each other. Maybe that gossiping gets directed towards Timmi and her mom as soon as Trixie spots her in the shower. Going from "Is she really her daughter? I mean her curves are nothing compared to her mom!" Nothing changes because it's true. "Speaking of her mom, she's such a slut and leaking all over the place. I heard that the janitor was busy cleaning for a whole day when she was attending a school event." All the girls laugh but her mother doesn't change because she's lactating quiet a lot already. "Is she some kind of wet-nurse or something because those leaky tits of hers are something else" Maybe that's the starting point for the stuff you mentioned. Reality changes which makes Timmy's mom a wet-nurse now. The girls minds change and someone says "I bet all females of her family are.." which would make that heritage and bloodline thing true. This makes Timmi not developing an even weirder case and causes the stuff Trixie says to the other girls. I would tune down the horniness and her massive tit-growth. Don't want her to be a full-on horny slut just yet. For the tits: maybe a F or heavy G-cup or something instead of something as huge as the other girls so we can transform her further later on. Don't know how to rephrase that horny statement to make it less "impactful". I like the breastfeeding addiction and all the other changes :) Good one!

GooPop
>>61813263

I don't know why my reply didn't send but essentially I agree with you, I think toning my suggestion down a bit is fine, I wrote it as if these were some of the last pages but apparently its going to go on for a bit more. I can't help but get fully into it when I come up with ideas. I think her tits should definitely be healthy G's, could you explain the part were you said "This makes Timmi not developing an even weirder case and causes the stuff Trixie says to the other girls." ? Also I what horny part are you talking about? If you mean the masturbation in the shower with the dildo I suppose instead Trixxi's statement could have said something like "She is just touching herself without shame in that shower, I know she is a lone but keep it together right girls?" Which would change Timmi being in the shower washing herself and failing horribly at trying to cover herself up to essentially having an erotic shower were she might vaguely squeeze a boob or tug a nipple and touch her pussy, and maybe the soap starts to become phallic shaped and that could be the scene as she is thrust out of her predicament when she sees the soaps changed shape and cuts the shower short before that escalates and we are treated to milky bouncing boobs and a masturbating Timmantha/Timmi. I honestly like both names but I think Timmi is better lol.

schinkn
>>61813263

Yeah, I realized that it's kinda hard to understand. I mean with all the girls' previous statements Timmi's mother and all the females before her were wet-nurses. Because they all had huge tits and lactated a lot it makes the fact that Timmi hasn't developed yet even weirder. After that she could jokingly say "Maybe she's just a late bloomer, could be that her mom was the same when she was young. I mean we all know that her mom is a horny slut and Timmi is definitely coming after her! She's touching herself without shame in the shower as we speak!" Maybe Timmi hears that statement of hers whispering "What is she talking about, I'm not touching-" Her statement becomes true as Timmi starts touching herself in the shower with all the stuff you described + warping soap lol. After that she is just theory crafting lol " *Gasp* What if thats how it started for her mom? She became insatiably horny and would masturbate often and that kicked off her puberty, and then her tits became huge and milky! She wasn't even pregnant but I guess thats what happens when your family has generations of wet nurses in it. They just develop huge milk filled titties on their own!" Which changes Timmi's tits? Everything gets a bit out of hand as she maybe teases her pussy with the soap but stops herself.

GooPop
>>61813263

you didn't see that part in my original post? I addressed the late bloomer thing on purpose, I intentionally put in their essentially that her mom was a late bloomer and that it seems timmi is too. And the reason for it is they hadn't tried masturbating and the first time they masturbated is what set off their puberty, which is what they thought timmi was doing in the shower and since they say it out loud it becomes true.

GooPop

Yup at the beginning of my post I address the oddity of timmi not being like her mom "You know I heard Timantha's mom was a late bloomer but look at her now she has amazing curves, I bet Timantha is the same way I mean look how horny she is using a dildo in the showers while we are all here. I hear thats how it started for her mom, she became insatiably horny and would masturbate often and that kicked off her puberty, and then her tits became huge and milky. She wasn't even pregnant but I guess thats what happens when your family has generations of wet nurses in it. They just develop huge milk filled titties on their own." Not sure if you missed that but I thought of everything sir lol.

schinkn
>>61898923

I know. Just changed the beginning so it sounds more like her headcanon instead of something she heard lol

schinkn
>>61813263

I know, I just puzzled everything together + added a little bit before Trixie talks. Did that for myself to fully understand the timeline xD

GooPop
>>61898923

Ah okay it just seemed like you didn't see it, but you did :D.