Remember this? Girl me neither. (Patreon)

After letting this sit for a while I came back to it and decided I just needed to redraw it a touch. I have been on a journey to tweak some things about my artstyle and I've MUCH happier with it now! The page between these two remains largely unchanged, but the faces and some of the anatomy really weren't doing it for me on these ones here. Anyways, here's the after and the before for anyone who might find that interesting.