[Hereafter] Chapter XX: Paladin at Thiers (Patreon)

Editor had some real life drama to deal with, so this is a few days later than when I "finished" it, but I hope the surprise at the end makes up for the delay.

This is, so far, a relatively minor deviance from canon Orleans, especially compared to Carmilla's early death. Having said that, the presence of Elizabeth made some sense against Carmilla, but Kiyohime didn't, and frankly, the scenario writer for Orleans kinda squandered the Elizabeth v Carmilla subplot.

Poor Glory Girl, though. She has such a dubious honor to serve as a comparison to that Servant. Or perhaps it's the other way around, and that Servant has the dubious honor of being compared to Glory Girl?

EDIT: Moving this down the rest of the way.