[Hereafter] Chapter CXXXI: The Modern Prometheus (Patreon)
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In the end, I never found a better title for this one. It's also a little late, but it's a little longer to make up for that.
The real trouble this chapter gave me was the ending. No one wanted to just shut up and wrap things up, and while I could have just pushed that final bit of conversation into the next chapter... Yeah, Taylor wouldn't have let it go. Her insisting made that impossible, so things wound up stretched out a bit.
I know Renée wound up a bit of a surprise for everyone when she was introduced, and she hasn't had that much screentime yet, but initial thoughts? The editor likes her and thought that scene was adorable, but I'd like to hear your opinions on her, too.
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 2/12/2024