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Here's the finished page 40.

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Media Droid

She’s try’na steal her boi

pokediginut

Well we’re all in agreement that Shen is dynamite in the sack

NDG

5 down, 8 to go!

Michael Michael

Those twins are quite cute ♥ Love to see Zaphira jumps to proctect him. And also being honest. Violet daiimm lady. Direct to the point.

Viro Veteruscy

Violet: TARGET ACQUIRED! >w>

Alex Bourdages

What you don't see in the panel is that Zaph also has her legs wrapped around Shen.

GreenDreamer

Aries ♈️ represent! 🐏 Whoop whoop!

Jem

The outfits continue to be spectacular

SeanSupreme

Zaphira engaging lockdown mode is adorable.

11Natrium

Violet is quite a personification of a ram, huh 👀

rudyGGfurry666

Violet gave him her fuck-me eyes

Ryan Jones

Ok shen sweating is adorable

StumpedMoose

Aww, the twins are pretty darn cute, but damn! Don't tease us like that, Violet!

Grizz

Zephyr is hotter than violet, fight me lol

Alex Bordo

Zaphira be like “HE’S MINE!”

Shmi Skyrunner

When your wife is embarrassed but but still wants to give you praise. Hell yeah Shen.

rodso64

A plague of riches... ;)

Mazzy Techna

to cute , she will protect

Iselwyr

Sister has good taste, Violet approves

Catsnightmare

Zaphy's hood flare! So scarily adorable

pj wolf

I do enjoy how possessive Zaphira is... possessive and also willing to be boastful I *am* curious how the first four panels are supposed to be arranged... maybe toss in some arrows?

Joseph Purves

It's almost like a zigzag. To me, the panels go like this: Top, down left, top right, bottom right, down left, top right, bottom right.

zummeng

Yes, as Joseph said :) This is actually a very common arrangement in comics. Here's a little help if you don't know how to follow panels: https://www.booktrust.org.uk/news-and-features/features/2012/how-to-read-comics-a-beginners-guide/

ÄlveKatt

I have seen indie comics struggle with this, and published comics messing it up badly too... Combining image composition and speech bubble placement to make it clear in what order to read is a special art skill in itself. This page is almost perfectly laid out, but I did read the first two speech bubbles in the third panel in the wrong order at first. But this is difficult shit, in any comics I have read that mess this up I can never say I could have laid it out better. But I bet you could use Gestalt principles, a concept from cognitive psychology, as a kind of guide. https://www.simplypsychology.org/what-is-gestalt-psychology.html https://www.interaction-design.org/literature/topics/gestalt-principles