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This is another page that I wasn't particularly excited for... I feel like this option kind of stalls the story another week, since having Sindra's balls start to grow again just kind of puts us back where we were three weeks ago. For a while there it seemed that there was a conscious, measurable effort to get the story moving forward, but I'm worried that we're losing sight of that goal. I'd appreciate if everyone consider pushing towards finishing this chapter. We're definitely closer to that idea, at least in terms of getting all of the characters together in one area. I'm considering adding my own ideas to the poll, but I worry that doing so would be disingenuous to the intent of this series... what do you all think?

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Anonymous

I agree that this page is a bit redundant. I voted for the ending last week (where Jenna finally climaxes in Sindra). Once the encounter between Sindra and Jenna is over, then the story can continue in the other scenes. I don't mind seeing your ideas in the poll, but I think the number of options for the last one was a good one; the more options there are, the harder it is for people to unite under a few options. I think if Jenna climaxes inside Sindra in the next page it would be a good stopping point for these two. (Or since Sindra's balls are swollen her dick gets shoved in another hole, maybe one of Jenna's, and they both get full with each other's cum).

Alinoris

Ok..for the next page, I can only repeat what I already proposed (:p): Jenna's cock grows so much to lift up Sindra from the ground. Jenna starts to orgasm intensely but Sindra tightens her pussy to try to hold back Jenna's load, however the pressure is simply too much even for Sindra and her belly starts to inflate, until a "cum geyser" from Jenna's cock pushes her against a tree, knocking her down, while also Jenna faints because everything was just too much for her. Even if both are unconscious, cum keeps flowing slowly from the 2 women's cocks and also from Sindra's pussy. ...............About the whole story, that's a possible scenario: Aqua sexually destroys Anastasia and Eve until both pass out...but she's still unsatisfied, so when she hears some noises from the back room, she moves there looking for more preys...and in fact she finds Lily's crew "assaulting" Kat. Aqua thinks she will have more easy fun, but the 3 girls are in berserker mode, so it's them to actually assault an astonished Aqua, who can't resist their "sexual fury". Eventually Kat (after she will recover ofc ^^) will be able to retrieve the 2nd jewel from an exausted Aqua, who will be rescued by Feuille's plants. At this point Bianca and Lily arrive and it seems our heroines will win, as they recovered both jewels, BUT......the monster girls now have an hostage to bargain for! In fact Sindra, who is much stronger than Jenna ofc, was faster to wake up and easily captured Bianca's daughter. The final (sexual) confrontation will follow ^^

Extremist Comics

Sex should never overtake story in a serialized narrative of this length...unless it's a futa's balls swelling immensely because she can't cum, which should be the only thing that ever happens in any story.

Shotred

I see what you are coming from I take it you like the flow of your comic fast pace, to me sex scenes shouldn't be that fast depending on the situation but I do agree this made us take a step back in the story. My first suggestion takes us to where Bianca and Lily heading to Anastasia hut during that time they see Kat knock out on the floor with cum all around her. After looking they notice that they are surrounded by Lilly's crew with crazy lust in there eyes. ................................ My second suggestion we see the Wood Elf find Sindra and Jenna stuck together she uses her powers with nature to make the tress come to life where they carry Lily and Sindra back at the temple. She ask Sindra is Aqua still at Anastasia hut, Sindra responded yes and is Bianca then we see the wood elf straight towards to Anastasia hut. I only made 2 this time because I want to see how will this will play out in the polls.

Kenneth

I think its been a good couple months now but I made a suggestion a while back that it was still ultimately up to you weather or not one of our suggestions is added to the final voting block. At the time it didn't really gain much traction but if you are interested in trying to move the story forward it might be something to consider again. At the same time I think Side-Dishes is probably the best its been in a while. Most of the exposition and backstory has been handled so we can focus in on some longer sex scenes, again.

CGI

I actually mentioned something recently in correspondence with the boss, mainly if he wants to do a longer story after this one in the future, then he should have the story directed by himself and only GUIDED by the suggestions but have the actual erotica done in a poll like it is currently. That way the story is still based on patron input and the "Action" is entirely done by the poll but it allows him to move the story forward as he likes, it stops loops like this one xP

Kenneth

Story idea: While I agree that this page has kind of made us go backwards I personally think at this point it would be kind of a cop-out to just quickly finish this Jenna x Sindra scene on the next page. I suggest that Jenna cums, inflating Sindra belly excessively but allows the demon girl to slide off Jenna's cock. The page ends with Sindra rising to her feet, cum still gushing out of her dick (and other orifices), a look of anger and lust on her face as she informs a confused and exhausted Jenna that she is going to make her pay for this and show her what it really means to screw with a demon.