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Okay, the people have spoken!  Industrious will be focused again this month, but Winning Peace is catching up so it gets the next chapter (possibly two, even).  After that it's a pair of Industrious chapters again and we'll see how everything else shakes out.

Oh, and as the poll indicated I have opened up a new $5.00 tier for those who want to throw more money at me.  I will try my absolute hardest to up my word count in the coming month to make it worthy of your increased support!

Rock on and stay awesome!

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Industrious 31-40

Chapter 31: Satsuki watched as Yakumo and I prepared another series of canvases and metal frames for the tertiary testing of a new gate. While the project had been officially taken over by a group from ANBU's research and development division, the body language that the masked individuals had g...

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Robert Krol

What's up with all the stuff wrong with this? You've got text bolded, turned weird colors, invisible, etc?

Ryune

I am sort of surprised that he has to apply the seal directly to his head. We have at least three examples of seals being written elsewhere and then applied to another surface. Two of which are applied to skin. The evil sealing seal Kakashi uses on Sasuke is written along the entire room in addition to characters written on his skin and the curse seal applied by Orochimaru, while fantastically complex, is placed with a bite. In addition to that we also have the 5 element seal placed by orochimaru on Naruto with a grab. It feels like he should have been able to apply to seal to a scroll and then transfer it to himself.

Slayer Anderson

Someone had an especially egregious case of butterfingers when reading the doc this time. Changes purged, though. Should be fine now.

Wolf Man

Maybe it’s for stable, long term stuff? All the examples given feel like exceptions rather than the rule.

Anonymous

Kotaro teaching them valuable life lesson continues :)

Slayer Anderson

I'll be doing a more detailed explanation of this shortly, but it boils down to being easier to tie into the chakra network if you're physically closer to the gate/organ you want to effect.

Flygar

Super excited for more interludes with reactions from across the village as time keeps passing. Always fun to see people react to the wunderkid