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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 43 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-01-22 19:07:53
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2025-01
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A bitter dinner banter.

 

 

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Spawn

Their family was never normal though, Lynn Sr. Give ‘em a chance 😭

Gonçalo Sampaio

A new Page wo-ho! Excited to see more. Keep up the good work

Paul Hoon

And so it begins 🙄. They don't trust them to be alone, they don't get a say, etc. Yeah, I don't know how much more Lincoln and Lynn can take.

El Pinche Barry

Viene una discusión que debió aparecer la vez pasada. Me gustaría que alguna hermana defienda a sus padres y Lucy con otra hermana quien defienda a Lincoln y Lynn jr. Una pregunta mi estimado Underrated. Lori, Leni y Luna recibieron la misma orden de no decir nada?

Roberto Soto

I just became a new member and i absolutely love how the story is going so far

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Oh boy, a new page of the comic... ( After reading the page for 1 minute ) Daaaaaaaannnng, I wasn't expecting that to happen. First, Lynn Jr and Lincoln's secret gets out, Lola takes her anger out on Lincoln for betraying her, and now Lynn Sr and Rita are keeping their kids in captivity? And all because Lynn Sr wants things to be normal? ( Freaking Out Like Crazy ) This can't be happening to them! That's like capturing 🐎 Mustangs and putting them in captivity. Doh, the suspense is killing me more now than it has before! I HOPE LINCOLN AND LYNN JR FIND A WAY OUT OF THIS MESS!!!!! Until then... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until Another Page Comes Out )

Paul Hoon
>>162129261

Excellent point. Nothing about them has ever really been "normal."

Silvester Rodriguez

This Is Gonna So Shocking About Lynn Sr Forbids Lynn Jr & Lincoln A Lesson No Dating & Need Help Also Stay Home For They Own Good.

alex sonic

A que hora se vienen los madrasos

Gabriel Corrales
>>162129261

It’s incest dude. Like I truly think that the only way they can make this a somewhat good ending, is if they make Lincoln adopted

Double Gron

Lincoln’s protesting is almost making things worse. I don’t want them to be miserable, it’s just that they should know that their own family is important and they should love each other in a normal way.

C.E. Zim93

Define "normal" Lynn Sr. Your family isn't exactly "normal". And this is going to be interesting

Corey Peters

He is going to drive them away family be dammed.

CipherRage0909

Um, your family isn't exactly "normal", Mr. Loud. 🙄 I mean, do we have to bring up Royal Woods Spa? 😏 Keeping Lincoln and Lynn apart from each other and isolating them is only going to make things even worse. Their lust and love for each other is immenseful. I'll bet they were trying so hard not to kiss or touch each other at that dinner table.

Thuren Miller

I wasn't not expecting Lynn.Sr to raised his like, Shocking.

Thuren Miller

I agree, being normal doesn't run in the Loud family.

Paul Hoon
>>162128595

They're gonna run away. I mean, what else are they going to do? Let themselves be prisoners in their own home?

Double Gron
>>162137858

Well I’m sure they won’t do that. They’ll come up with something fair.

underratedhero
>>162137858

To be fair, they don't want them isolated, they want the exact opposite: not leave them alone lol

underratedhero
>>162135629

He thinks "the way things were two days ago before we found out about this" is their "normal" lol

underratedhero
>>162135068

They can't, though. They love each other the way they do. Didn't ask for it, didn't want it to happen, but that's how it is, and that's the reality they have to live with.

underratedhero
>>162129668

I don't know if I just chose the wrong words or what, but they're not keeping them in captivity. They just don't want the two of them to be left alone. Rita tried to dress it up as "no one stays home alone" but the kids know what their real intention is, that's why they talk back like that.

underratedhero
>>162129261

Making Lincoln adopted would be a cheap trick that would take the entire drama away from it. Literally the only reason why there's conflict and the story can happen is because they're related lol If they weren't, the story would've ended in volume 2 when they realize they like each other.

underratedhero
>>162128878

Creo que ya tuvimos suficientes discusiones, y las posturas no han cambiado. Sería un poco repetitivo. Las hermanas mayores ya saben que esto no es algo que puedan andar compartiendo con otros. El mensaje era más que nada para las menores, y a Luan por las dudas lol

underratedhero
>>162128027

Yeah, but there's a difference between "one of kids is super into rock music" and "two of them are fucking" lol

Double Gron
>>162135068

Well all I can say is this is going to be a really long negotiation 🙁.

I.O. Penner

As much as I'd like to shame Lynn Sr. for his comment, I'm sure that what he said about his children getting over their romantic relationship was probably just in the heat of the moment. Still doesn't look good on him, but the world as he knows it is turning upside down and inside out. So I can kind of cut him some slack, in that regard. But the implication that Lincoln and Lynn are abnormal for pursuing this love is not going to sit well with them. Those hurtful words will echo in their minds for some time, even as they see the psychologist, I'm sure. Now I imagine we're just waiting for Lincoln and/or Lynn to flee the table in shock and tears . . .

Jacob Lossing

Lynn Sr does seem to understand the normal doesn't really exist in this day and age, it's starting to look like Lincoln and Lynn need to run away to be happy

Paul Hoon
>>162128595

@UnderratedHero Definitely. By the way, check your messages on Twitter. I think you'll like what I've sent you.

SoulTy

Pretty sure the watching them thing will only work with a few of them. Lucy might let them see one another

Double Gron
>>162152840

Well they can’t just move out or run away just because their parents won’t approve of their abnormal relationship. They have no idea what they’re (Lynn and Lincoln) getting themselves into.

Double Gron
>>162150360

Mmmm…probably or one of them might have a sudden outburst. If they do they’ll be almost crossing the line or crossing the line fully. This keeps getting more invigorating 😟.

underratedhero
>>162150360

In the end, Lincoln and Lynn know they can't ask for the family's approval, but the least they expect is some understanding. Being called abnormal, or a deviant, or however you want to call it... Well, that has to hurt, for sure.

Paul Hoon
>>162129261

Making Lincoln adopted? Doesn't that feel like a copout? If he was then they could be together legally, but yeah, that sucks out all the drama.

Gabriel Corrales
>>162129261

Honestly it just makes more sense to go with it. Honestly the drama is good, I’m all for it, I’m just more curious on how else Underrated is gonna end this story. Cuz they’re one of three ways it could end: one, they accept they can’t be together. Two, they get together anyway and respectfully, that isnt a good thing. And three, Lincoln is adopted, they can be together, and it won’t be as bad.

Gabriel Corrales
>>162129261

It’s is underrated’s story to make, so accept whatever it ends with. But with stories that have drama like this one, literally ended with them dying. And, I’m an optimistic with this stuff but I do have my own reasons why, having Lincoln being adopted, while being too easy, would be the best outcome. In this case, from a narrative standpoint, I would prefer a good ending, or the best outcome.

Jose Hernandez

once your notion of normal has been shattered you'll only cut yourself trying to put it back together.

BRICE MORRIS

Wow Lynn Senyer if he can't accept your kids and there feeling for each other then I don't believe he deserves to have is daughter and only son in there lives or a part of Lincoln and Lynn Jr's lives at all and ever again if he can't accept and support them for who they are and how they feel for each other

Paul Hoon

I don't know why, but for Lincoln and Lynn, I keep thinking about the song End Credits (feat. Leah Kelly) by Eden. For some reason, some of the lyrics fit what I think Lincoln and Lynn are feeling right now. "And all we ever wanted Was sunlight and honesty Highlights to wanna repeat Let's get away from here and Live like the movies do I won't mind when it's over At least I didn't think for a while" "So let's run Make a great escape And I'll be waiting outside for the getaway It doesn't matter who we are We'll keep running through the dark And all we'll ever need is another day We can slow down 'cause tomorrow is a mile away And live like shooting stars 'Cause happy endings hardest to fake Yeah" Because right now, their family is not accepting the love they have for each other. They know it's wrong, but they're not hurting anyone, and they can't help what they're feeling. They tried to ignore it, but that didn't work, and now their parents are trying to force "normal" down upon them, but that's never going to happen. Years from now, nothing will ever be the same again. They're never going to look at them the same way. Lincoln and Lynn aren't going to submit to this. Their feelings for each other will just grow with ever longing until they can't stand it anymore. And there's no way UnderratedHero is going to end it with them giving up because what kind of ending is that?